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Aliens are Nice
"Third Place 10-13 Category"
By: Allison Hartley | Published: 2011
One day, at the end of December, when it was supposed to be snowing but was raining instead, Susanna was looking
out of the classroom window with a dull expression on her face. Anyone who looked out of the window felt tired. The
small forest was wet, the ground was muddy, and the evergreens looked like a soaked dark green cloth. Everything
looked sad when it was supposed to look magical.
But that day something magical did happen, Susanna’s dream to see aliens came true! She was walking down the empty
gray hallway on her way to Astronomy class, when she heard a gurgling noise coming from the custodian room. It
wasn’t really a disgusting gurgling because it was high and shaky. Susanna looked around to make sure that no one
saw her and slipped in. The custodian room was dark and cluttered. It was filled with mops, buckets, ladders, and
paintbrushes; and it smelled like chlorine.
Right in the middle of the room she saw a girl about her age, except very short, only up to Susanna’s waist. The
girl was very pale and her eyes were black. She had pointy ears, shoulder-length chestnut coloured hair, and wore a
long creamy white dress with puffy sleeves. She looked adventurous but confused, and was making the gurgling noise
that Susanna had heard. Immediately, Susanna knew that this was an alien, as the girl sounded like an
extraterrestrial movie character.
Susanna quietly came up to her and said “Hello”. The alien murmured something that sounded like “hello”. Susanna
pointed to herself and said, “Susanna”. The alien slowly stretched out her left hand, put it onto her tummy, and
said, “E-e-ba-a”. Susanna noticed that the girl had only three fingers. Happy that E-e-ba-a understood English,
Susanna told her that she was going to show her to somebody she trusted. The alien nodded her head.
There was only one person in the whole school who believed in aliens, Susanna’s Astronomy teacher Mr. Phobos. So
she brought the alien down to the Astronomy class. However, when Mr. Phobos saw the extraterrestrial, he screamed
and hid under his desk, while E-e-ba-a darted out of the classroom. Susanna rushed after her. In the hallway, the
alien made a huge leap into the air and began to tiptoe in the mid-air very quickly. Susanna was too stunned to
follow after her. In a moment the alien disappeared from sight.
Susanna wanted to find the alien to say sorry. She went to the custodian room to think of a new plan. She was
sitting there on top of the big red bucket with a pencil in her mouth (for better ideas, of course). She was
thinking of a way to prove to the Astronomy teacher that aliens are nice, when she saw a piece of paper in one of
the black buckets. It turned out to be a grading sheet.
Suddenly, Susanna heard somebody walking down the hall, mumbling. It was Mr. Phobos. “I can’t believe it! How could
it happen? Aliens came to Earth, probably to invade! And also the semester grading sheet lost! What will the
superintendent do? He’ll fire me!!!” By the end of that mumble she already had a plan!
Susanna ran out of the school to find the alien. She rushed through the wet grass, jumping over puddles, trying to
avoid plopping herself into sticky mud. When she reached the forest, she heard the gurgling sound again. This time
it resembled a slow singing. E-e-ba-a was sitting on a stump; her hair was wet from the rain. She was fearfully
staring at Susanna with her big black eyes. Susanna told the girl that she was going to prove to the Astronomy
teacher that aliens are nice. So they snuck back into the school where Susanna gave her new friend the important
grading sheet and told her to give it to the Astronomy teacher.
Mr.Phobos was sitting by the window, thinking how upsetting things were. “How could this happen! Two of the worst
things happening in one day, this is probably the worst day in my whole life,” thought the astronomy teacher,
beginning to cry. Then suddenly the alien was right there and she was handing him the important grading sheet! He
now knew that this alien was not evil; she was good! He said, “Sorry”, and Susanna winked at him. She found a new
friend, and showed Mr. Phobos that aliens are nice.
Thank you very much for the guidance you have offered Allison during past writing camps. She was really thrilled to
find herself on the list of winners. - Allison's Mom
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